Some people think that giving aids to poor countries has more negative impacts than a positive one. To what extent do you agree.

Mostly

w

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orld is divided

in

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two parts.

First

one is poor .

second

is rich. Poor countries from that

world

sought for help.Many people argue that

these help

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sometime

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has not fruitful but has

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egative effect on people.But I

am completely disagree

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because without help the of richer countries to poor one complete cycle of

economy

and development. To embark,

Firstly

, richer countries need

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arket to sell their products to poor nations. In

this

way that particular

nation

develop

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their

economy

. In reverse, people from

these destitute

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this destitute nation

these destitute nations

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nation

get employment.

Moreover

, wealthy countries set up their industry in that particular country. In

this

way

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these countries become the

manufacture

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hub for the

world

.

For instance

, China is

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iggest example of

this

. Now almost all companies from the

world

have set up their company. In

this

way

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has

raise

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their

economy

, now it posses number

number

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two in wealth.

However

, some people argue that by helping

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oor

nation

sometime devastate their

economy

.They never learn to grow,

nevertheless

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of their development, they always look for help in term of finance as well as finish goods from the developed

nation

.

Moreover

, they spend their resources and manpower in militancy and other bad deeds.

For example

, when we take the case of Pakistan, nowadays Pakistan totally depend upon

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world

for their finish goods and their

economy

is going down day by day due to their focus on creating unrest in other countries.

However

, in my view developing

nation

should help

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oor

nation

, in reverse

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they are get

benigitted

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benefitted

benefited

by

these

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this nation

these nations

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nation

.

Becase

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Because

manufacturing of products need market and these poor countries are

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est bazaar to sell their things.

Secondly

, employment need can be easily met with help of these nations. In conclusion, we observer with help of wealthy

nation

, poor

nation

easily come over their poverty