You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Hello, I am writing in regards to the ad published in the Chronicle dated 18th September 2020, about working as an assistant in the City Museum shop during the winter vacations. I would like to apply for the aforementioned position. I am currently pursuing my

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. in Palaeontology and

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would be a wonderful opportunity for me to work and pursue my career owing to the plethora of resources at your disposal. I have previously worked in Archies Gift shop as an assistant during my high school years. I am

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proficient in dealing with customers. I can entice the elderly by providing more accurate and intriguing information about the artefacts in the museum and entertain children by sharing fun facts about the toy dinosaurs they are buying.

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opportunity will help me to bear my own expenses and ease my financial conditions. Looking forward to

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response from you. Thanks and regards, Ross Geller.

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6 paragraphs

157 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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