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Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Some people are of the opinion that the vendors should sell local
food
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 products
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 of marketing imported products. Even though it gives an advantage and economical benefits to the indigenous producers, imported edibles cannot be completely taken out
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 stores due to its increasing popularity.
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, I partially agree
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 notion. On the one side, several benefits to the local
food
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 suppliers when their product is bought and sold in the local
market
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.
Demand
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of
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 the goods in the
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 at a tremendous rate when imported goods are reduced or completely excluded.
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 in UAE 50 percentage of the fruits and vegetables are imported from Asian markets.
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 of
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ountry
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 will improve the local
market
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 demand and supply. Additional,
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 an income circulation within the country.
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, it is very suitable to consider selling local
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 products over the imported ones. The other side there is a downside to
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 option of choosing ingrown
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 products.
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there is a huge demand for international consumables. People are ready to spend money to get there decide items.
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if
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 stores choose not to keep imported consumables, the customers will go online to buy it is a very reliable and convenient option
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 of using the local substitute. For the more, there are certain products which can only be produced under
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ertain atmospheric condition and with the killer products.
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, Parmesan cheese cannot be made in every country because of the requirement of certain bacteria for optimum taste.
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,it is not always viable to ignore
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 International products. To conclude cal dispose
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should try every possible
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 to support its own local products to get into
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 it is not always feasible to ignore the growing needs of consumers towards the foreign consumables.
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 the government should take initiatives to add the local producers
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 shutting of the imports
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