Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your option.

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Nowadays, watching television is a common
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activity
at home. Some people think that it has an impact on our
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with friends and family. I
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disagree
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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. Many people share their
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with family and friends and they always talk about
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on television.
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, we watch
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ews on
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and we
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talk about something relating to the new with our family member.
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not only can make a
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with them but
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create a good
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realtionships
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relationships
towards
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the family.
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, we
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talk about series which is
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show
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on
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. The evidence is a
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show
plaform
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platform
is called Netflix. It produces many famous series
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, film and programme and it
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a topic in
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society. We can talk about the plot with our friends that make our conversation become more interesting.
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, there are some drawbacks. Some people are
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programme addict. They just cannot stop to do with it. The best example is there
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some news about teenagers who watch
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and even forget sleep or to eat.
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, they have
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activity
by
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their own self.
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make
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them distract from others and become less to talk with their family and friends.
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, if they spend too much
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to watch
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alone.
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also
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make
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them reduce sharing
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with relatives.
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is why some people think that would
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destroy
the
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with each other. In conclusion,
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watching
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have some drawbacks by people do not limit their
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to watch
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.
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, I strongly believe that watching
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V show with our family and talk about
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series plots
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interesting
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with them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distraction
  • monopolize
  • meaningful conversations
  • engrossed
  • face-to-face interactions
  • weakened bonds
  • diminished quality
  • superficial content
  • sensational
  • negatively affecting
  • social development
  • family-oriented programs
  • bonding activities
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