Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many people prefer buy some cooked
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food
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instead
of cooking at home. I think the disadvantages of this
trajectory outweight
the advantages. In Correct your spelling
outweigh
this
essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view.
There have many disadvantages of people who purchase food
from markets, such
as higher price and u
nhealthy diet. Add an article
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, many
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much
food
in restaurant or supermarket, they are added many salt or MSG in order to make them delicious, while these kind of Change to a plural noun
foods
food
are unhealthy and not good for our health if we take these
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food
for a long period. Moreover
, delivery
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food
are
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is
also
more expensive than cooking at home. For instance
, we buy ingredients from l
ocal market, it may cost under 100 dollars a day. But if we buy cooked Add an article
the
food
, it would be much more
higher prices.
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On the other hand
, eating delivery
are also
have benefits for people, like time saving
and save effort. The evidence is nowadays many people are busy Add a hyphen
time-saving
on
their work, so they do not have much time to prepare their Verify preposition usage
with
in
food
. In addition
, not everybody can cook well, so eating cooked food
can reduce their cooking times. The best example is some people do not enjoy the diet that they made, subsequently
they no need to pay effort on the cooking skill if they buy some delivery
.
In conclusion, while some people take delivery
rather than cooking at home can save time and effort. However
, I strongly that the
drawbacks are more than advantages. Because it would be more expensive to buy cooked Remove the article
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food
from outside and it also
unhealthy beacuse
they are added many salts and MSG.Correct your spelling
because
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