Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.

The figure depicts the pH
level
of different sources of
sugar
within tooth destruction is likely or unlikely occurs during 40 minutes after the substance was ingested. Overall, it is evident that the acid indicators for fruit, cane and
honey
sugar
plunge after a little time, after which steadily reach the same position by the end of the period.
Furthermore
,
honey
is the least damaging source of
sugar
as its pH
level
stabilizes swiftly.
In
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the moment when three candies are eaten, each contains the exact same
level
of acid - at 7.
This
follows by an enormous drop to just below 5 for
honey
, to about 4.2 for cane, and to 3 for
honey
sugars in
first
5 minutes, causing the decay of tooth in a mouth.
Nevertheless
,
honey
remains at the same
level
during the
next
5 minutes, following which it experiences a gradual increase until 35
minute
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minutes
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. The figure for the fruit
sugar
also
augments during the following 35 minutes.
Similarly
, the pH
level
for cane shows a steady increase to 7 by the
last
40th minute.
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