Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

in my point of view, we can not leave never it died
also
as soon as possible the government have to invest capital in that important culture, every rick country has to spend fund with art,
this
is my opinion,
also
I believe that many people agree with me, but
in addition
,I'm going to explain both points in that essay with some examples.
First
, it is
also
important for human development,
this
is helpful to open people mind and make
this
world better, I can not imagine the life without it,
this
put more colour in the life help
also
we to be happy.
second
, cash from the government is the most necessary to art survive at the beginner,
however
after an art company make capital, they need to pay taxes to improve another kind of arts around the place.
on the other hand
, it isn't the priority and the most important thing, the money could be separated looking where is necessary.
finally
, culture came after the education and health sector and another's things but it is
also
important and necessary .
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