Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with, What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

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ital role in the development of children. Buying toys is an increasingly popular trend and every now and
then
parents buy toys resulting in
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arge
number
of toys with children .
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dvantages and disadvantages of
this
trend. There are numerous advantages of having
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number
of toys.
Firstly
children
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to self-educate themselves.
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, for working parents, it is hard to devote too much time to children in
such
cases children can remain engaged with toys and try to learn their own and stay in
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almer mood.
In addition
to learning, children are not addicted to mobile phones which is the major issue in today's world causing stressed eyes and minds.
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, a recent article in ¨Times of India¨ states that in 2018, nearly 70
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of
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children in big cities of India were addicted to mobile phones and complained about
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problems .
In addition
to advantages, there are many disadvantages
also
for having
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number
of toys. Children having
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ide variety of toys are often anti-social and are reluctant to play outdoor games which makes them physically inactive. These children
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it difficult to engage socially.
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, they are possessive of their toys and do not believe in sharing them with others, in
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they value materialistic things more than their friends.
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,
such
kids want to play with toys sitting at one place and are
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therefore
, deprived of physical activities and
hence
have dull physical health. In conclusion,
this
essay discussed both the advantages and the disadvantages of children having
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number
of toys . While there are benefits of having enormous toys , the drawbacks should not be overlooked.
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