There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Ahmed Alam, a resident of Strafford, Old Manchester. I am writing

this

letter expressing my dismay regarding the bus service in my area.

To begin

with, over the

last

weeks, the frequencies of the

buses

are not punctual.

Furthermore

, the conditions of a few

buses

are appalling and ask serious questions

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one’s safety.

For instance

, some seats are broken and some of the footboards of the

buses

are sturdy.

Lastly

, some

buses

have rude bus conductors. These factors are affecting my job. Due to

buses

running behind schedule, I arrive late to the office. During the journey, a few good people were injured due to the bad conditions of the

buses

. A few bus attendants are not courteous enough to accommodate and are not willing to help in

such

situations. I would like the company to invest more in the training and development of the

staffs

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. I would

also

like the company to pay more attention to maintenance.

Furthermore

, improving the communications among the

buses

resulting in punctuality. Looking for a favourable response. Yours faithfully, Ahmed Alam