An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is believed that tablets and other computers provided by schools tend to replace books and printed materials. Without any doubts
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this
trend has not only
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ositive influence on
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ducational process but
also
a negative impact on
student
's health.
To begin
with, we should bear in mind some pros of using digital materials at schools. In today's education quantity of school
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subjects
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increased.
Therefore
, students are supposed to carry plenty of books in their bags.
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, they are able to download
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all materials on tablets,
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makes their bags lighter for carrying.
Moreover
, the trend is considered to be modern and time-saving. Students can attend online libraries and have an
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access
to the Internet in order to find
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equired information more rapidly. A teacher is able to organise their lesson using digital desks and other facilities which increases a
student
's attention.
Nevertheless
,
this
alteration of printed materials is
considred
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considered
to be a cause of
student
's health problems. Because of the rise in using computers
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study, students'
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vision
has fallen. They get used to writing and reading on computers without prolonged breaks for their eyes. What is more, it
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that students' visual perception has decreased due to their complete involvement in
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igital process.
For example
, using computers during the whole day distracts students' attention from other essential needs and tasks.
As a result
, a
student
gets used to losing something and not realizing their actions at all. Ti
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, drawbacks of using computers and laptops at schools might be considerably mitigated by opportunities it provides,
however
, we should take into account its severe influence on students' health.
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