Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable fact that wildlife of our planet has been negatively influenced by human

activity

. For some people

this

problem seems to be unrecoverable,

however

others including myself argue that there are definitely some measures which can be taken in order to change the situation. On the one hand, it is impossible to stop

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etrimental effects of human

activity

on plants and animals globally.

Firstly

, people are consumers, and they provide their basic needs with products made of plants and animals.

For example

, in order to maintain their nutritional balance they use meat and various kinds of vegetation.

Secondly

, some species of animals and plants have already been disappeared from our ecosystem. So it is hard to replace them.

Finally

, there are many regions of the

world

where people have not been supplied with natural gas yet, and forests are their main fuel source. In cases like

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it is hard to stop deforestation.

In contrast

, I believe that it is possible to take some actions to cope with problems caused by human

activity

and preserve

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nature. The

first

and main step is to educate people about the results of their harmful influence

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the wildlife of our planet. They have to be informed that overuse of animals and plants will bring to

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xtinction of some species and damage the harmony of

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atural

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Furthermore

, governments should regulate the consumption of animals or plants. Application of fishing guidelines in Norway can be a good sample for

this

idea.

In addition

, developed states should help

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opulation of less developed countries in terms of natural gas supply and make them stop cutting down their forests. If deforestation of one part of the

world

does not prevent on time, it will cause a catastrophic impact on

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hole global ecosystem. In conclusion,

although

sometimes it seems hard to find out possible measures to protect animals or plants from negative influences of human

activity

, in my opinion providing people with information about the results of their behaviour and changing the policy of governments relating to

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ildlife of the

world

will certainly lead to positive changes.