More people today preferred to live alone in comparison to the past do you think it is a positive or negative development give your opinion and a relevant examples to support your view

As far as you are alive you have to live a life.
Now a days
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many people like to live alone rather than with someone else.It does not matter whether you live alone or with someone both of them has its pros and cons.In my opinion
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living alone has many positive as well as negative developments. Living alone has become a
life style
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lifestyle
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now a days
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. Significant of living alone is that there will be full peace of mind.Mental health plays an important role
for
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being productive,if we stay alone
then
there will be less stress compare to living with family. Apparently staying alone makes a
person
self reliable
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.
For example
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if
a
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I live with my family and I'm feeling
hungary
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hungry
Hungary
then
I've to wait for my mother to cook the food whereas if a
person
is staying alone
then
he can make himself food without waiting for anyone else.Living alone makes a
person
self
compatable
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compatible
comfortable
and
stress free
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of
unnessary
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unnecessary
problems.
On the other hand
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staying alone has its own disadvantages .If a
person
is more want to stay alone
then
he has to prepare
himselves
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himself
to face many problems.
Firstly
, he has to
getover
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get over
of homesickness.
For example
, if a
person
was living with his family
since
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l
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ast 20 years but suddenly he decided to live alone
then
he might feel lonely .
Secondly
, living alone means you've to do all your chores by
self
which will be devastating sometimes.
Moreover
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if a
person
falls sick
then
there will be
noone
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no one
none
to take care of him.Living alone can be hard as you've to face many problems and have to take care of yourself. In my opinion, compare to past
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many people
belive
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believe
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that living alone can make your life easy.Though everything has it's pros and cons
simillarly
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similarly
living alone
also
has its.Living alone can make a
person
self reliable
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and
stress free
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while it can
also
cause problems.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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