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Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city to ask about a 2 day business trip for yourself and your colleagues. Include An introduction to your office Information about the business trip Other requests

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to enquire about a 2-day reservation at your hotel for myself and 4 of my colleagues. We are currently employed at Birmingham and Associates, UK's leading legal firm, and would like to stay at your place in London from 17th to 19th October. Our travel to London is of grave importance as we are handling a merger of two of the biggest domestic cosmetics companies . Needless to say, we need a location where we can work uninterrupted and a host who can ensure comfortable and professional accommodation. Are a few conference rooms available for these meetings? We would like to book 3 - two medium-sized and 1 large one. As we are going to
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 throughout the day, we would appreciate
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 beverages and meals are directly supplied to our temporary
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. Our itinerary is hectic with back-to-back meetings with our prominent clients. Another facility we would like to avail ourselves of is the internet. We would need access to
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 and reliable connection with enough bandwidth to download large attachments. I hope you can accommodate us. Hoping for a positive response. Yours faithfully, Ashish Mishra.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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