In some countries the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening? What measures can be taken to stop it?
There is no doubt that the city dwellers' are facing problems in their lives and quality is degraded. The main reasons for the same are busy family rituals. they sit all
life
schedule and lack of exercise. Use synonyms
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, these can be effectively handled by improving the work-Linking Words
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balance and following healthy living.
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balance should be assured by both employee and employer.
Another problem is here is that unhealthy lifestyle, Use synonyms
in other words
, the city inhabitants usually forget to focus their health since they hardly get Linking Words
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, gradually, increases body weight and causes lifestyle disorders, Use synonyms
for instance
, heart diseases, kidney failure and breathing difficulties. It is extremely important to change these habits for the better, incorporating five by two diet and 30 minutes walk for five Linking Words
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has been proven to be successful in many European countries.
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