Some people believe is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academics subjects. Discuss both vies and give your opinion.

There’s been a complex inquisition about whether Physical Educations classes should be compulsory for all school-age children or they should use their spare

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for extra academic purpose. In one hand, studies show the lack of outdoor activities has increased both obesity in teenagers and enhanced their screen

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and computers, leading to lesser moments spent building meaningful relationships or developing life skills. On the other side, it has

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pportunity to optimize

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cademics side and prepare better for the competitive professional life ahead of them. Due to economic growth, skyscrapers have taken over the sites which could have been used for backyards and family

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, without being able to play outside for its danger new concrete nature nor spend

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sports at a local park, children and teenagers have been replacing exercising for screen

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at home through streaming channels, video games, text messages and TV. Scientists say the most important phase for brain and body development is from the ages 4 to 17, that said, compulsory Physical Education classes in school could, maybe for some kids, be the only hours spent on movement and cognition skills development.

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, some people may argue the world is too competitive and making physical education classes compulsory will only take

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from more academics subjects,

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as it does not lead to better grades in math, language, chemistry or physics, it could actually diminish the chances of getting into a

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university, taking away an opportunity for a supposable professional growth on their timelines. To summarize, even though, compulsory Physical Education classes for all children of school-age is a topic of controversy, since the

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spent performing on the fields could affect their academic skill, it could

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help kids into what comes about building meaningful relationships, decrease the levels of obesity in teenagers and enhance their cognitive and coordination skills.