There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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To the Editor, I am writing to inform you that I am living at

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bank view drive for three years and we moved here due to its affordability and its proximity to the city, and we really enjoy a public lawn near my home.But today,when I was going for walk in the morning,I saw an advertising label on the entrance of the garden and it was written on it that it is available for sale. If, the board councillor is planning to trade

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garden,

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,it would not be good because there is not any place near around my area where we can go for meditation and exercise and even old people of my era can not go anywhere else because they can not go far.As well as,there is not any other playground near my colony where kids can go and play with their friends.Even,board members did not ask anyone who is living here

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so long. If the committee will not take their steps back

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I and all my neighbours will do a protest activity to stop the selling of

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square.

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, I will appoint a lawyer and I will file a case to stop them because it is the only place for me and my neighbours to go somewhere and sit there in the fresh environment in

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

225 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

affiliation
recreational space
habitat
environmental well-being
community gatherings
tranquility
negative impacts
petition
collaborating
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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

The Greeting

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. What is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?