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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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To the Editor, I am writing to inform you that I am living at
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bank view drive for three years and we moved here due to its affordability and its proximity to the city, and we really enjoy a public lawn near my home.But today,when I was going for walk in the morning,I saw an advertising label on the entrance of the garden and it was written on it that it is available for sale. If, the board councillor is planning to trade
this
 garden,
then
,it would not be good because there is not any place near around my area where we can go for meditation and exercise and even old people of my era can not go anywhere else because they can not go far.As well as,there is not any other playground near my colony where kids can go and play with their friends.Even,board members did not ask anyone who is living here
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 so long. If the committee will not take their steps back
then
 I and all my neighbours will do a protest activity to stop the selling of
this
 square.
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, I will appoint a lawyer and I will file a case to stop them because it is the only place for me and my neighbours to go somewhere and sit there in the fresh environment in
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 time. Thank you sefgrgfn
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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