many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays an increasing number of them are done using machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development

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years ago, everything is done by manually in homes especially.
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, nowadays, people are loved to live
life
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their works with the help of machines. Uses of technology have some benefits as well as there are some
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I will discuss both positive and negative perceptions. On the one hand, it cannot be denied, machines play
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ital role in
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modern world. Everyone is depending on technology and they prefer to bring appliances to their homes. Because of machines are less time consuming and it gives
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omfortable
life
.
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, we can wash a bucket of clothes at a time by using of
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ashing
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Furthermore
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more accurate than human beings
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in every kitchen there
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a lots
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lender, microwave oven, juicer and these give
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ame taste as well. On the flip side, the disadvantages of uses of
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for home chores, people live
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nhealthy
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because there is no manual work to do.
For instance
, people gain their weight because there is no activity in their daily
life
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, children can learn a lot of things with manually things done and which can be helpful in their future lives. To conclude, in modern
life
people prefer technology for doing their tasks which is save their time.
Therefore
uses of machinery in routine
life
create numerous health problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • manual labor
  • hazardous jobs
  • initial investment
  • production costs
  • job displacement
  • skills gap
  • technical skills
  • reliance
  • vulnerabilities
  • breakdowns
  • cyber attacks
  • craftsmanship
  • artisanal skills
  • cultural heritage
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