Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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ifferent point of views,
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global warming is
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one of the most debatable
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nowadays. Some people believe that it is
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overnment responsibility to deal with climate changes problem and other people think that every single person has their own responsibility to save the climate. I will discuss both
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I will give my views
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First
of all, it is
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true
sure
that the
environment
problem increases day by day because the main reason is
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sage of
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the
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air
pollution and
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climate.
For example
, so many packages of
plastic
layers are used in every single product.
Secondly
, local residents
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throw the garbage anywhere without any hesitation.
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ack of designate place for garbage and waste.
On the other hand
, the most of people think that the
government
is
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responsibility
responsible
to control the
environment
change issue by introduce of new laws regarding the environmental pollution and
also
it is the local authorities duties to make proper rules about these type of problems.
Furthermore
, industries should reduce the usage of
plastic
packaging of products. They can use other packaging material for packing
instead
of
plastic
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uty of
government
and as well as every individual, the authority should put heavy fines and punishments who break the rules and regulation.
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overnment should work on their management systems and add more places for garbage and waste. It is
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uty of every citizen to follow the rules and save the
environment
. In conclusion, global warming is
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uge issue but
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and individuals do their duties in
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roper way,
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nvironment and the issue of global warming will b solved.
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