Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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ifferent point of views,

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global warming is

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one of the most debatable

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nowadays. Some people believe that it is

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overnment responsibility to deal with climate changes problem and other people think that every single person has their own responsibility to save the climate. I will discuss both

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I will give my views

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First

of all, it is

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true

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that the

environment

problem increases day by day because the main reason is

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sage of

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air

pollution and

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climate.

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, so many packages of

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layers are used in every single product.

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, local residents

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throw the garbage anywhere without any hesitation.

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ack of designate place for garbage and waste.

On the other hand

, the most of people think that the

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responsibility

responsible

to control the

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change issue by introduce of new laws regarding the environmental pollution and

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it is the local authorities duties to make proper rules about these type of problems.

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, industries should reduce the usage of

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packaging of products. They can use other packaging material for packing

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uty of

government

and as well as every individual, the authority should put heavy fines and punishments who break the rules and regulation.

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overnment should work on their management systems and add more places for garbage and waste. It is

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uty of every citizen to follow the rules and save the

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uge issue but

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roper way,

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nvironment and the issue of global warming will b solved.

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Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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