In some time countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Usually finishing high school represent an important moment in our

life

because is the time when you decide

who

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you wanna become, what path you want to take , where you wanna go, and most of that decisions are influenced by our beliefs, family and society´s norms.

That is

why in some countries, as the argument mention, young people are encouraged to

work

or

travel

for a

year

before they start their

university

´s studies. I believe is important to understand all the

arists

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artists

of taking

this

advice.

First

of all, if someone

decide

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to take a

year

gap

because he or she doesn´t know which career to choose. It will be a great decision to

travel

, because you will have the opportunity to learn about different cultures, expanding your view of the world, and in that journey

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you could probably find yourself and your propose of living and choose a wise decision regarding their career. Another good point is that if you take a

year

to

work

because you do not have the money to

travel

, it could be a great

opportunitie

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opportunity

for saving money and start

university

with

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worries about your economic future,

also

you could probably treat yourself to a nice restaurant with tasty foods, new gadgets, etc.

On the other hand

, if you take a

year

,in a sense, you will "lose" time because people who decide to start

right

away will finish

university

earlier and place themselves in the

work

environment than a person who took a

year

gap

.

Also

, start the

university

right

after finishing high school could make the process of learning easier because you´ll adapt to the

rythm

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rhythm

of study faster than the others. Another point is that in an ideal situation if the person

manage

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to catch a job

right

after finishing

university

and continue to

work

for 20 years more they will end working one

year

earlier than the other human who

decide

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to take a

year

gap

. To summarize, studying

right

afert

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after

high school could have their great points like finishing

university

earlier and place yourself at

work

younger than the others.

However

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taking a

year

gap

to

work

or

travel

could be a great idea to find your real propose in

life

if you do not what to do with your

life

or saving extra money to buy fancy stuff. I believe that in the end

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the

decission

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decision

of taking a

year

gap

of not will depend

of

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on

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your needs , personally

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I think that

travel

to find what you really want to do with your

life

is the best

decission

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decision

.