A particular issue about
life
and time has raised quite a concern at home and abroad. As the film actor John Wayne once considered
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it is essential for human beings to step forward towards the
future
.
However
, one of the most prevalent phenomena is that modern
people
are inclined to emphasize on present time rather than take a chance to seize the
future
, it is more than necessary to search for the root causes first and
then
look at the advantages of focusing on the
future
.
There is a kaleidoscope of reasons to block humans from stepping forward. For one thing, owing to the
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technology and science,
people
are nowadays being confined or mired in what societies have achieved today. A wide range of
people
are being materialized and are satisfied with their
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.
Therefore
, losing the motivation to drive into a brighter
future
,
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can cause
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and impede the next generation
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into a greater civilization. For another, it is hard for modern
people
to devote their efforts to the mysterious and unstable
future
,
due to
the harsh atmosphere that they have to face within their lifetime -either during their workplace, families
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or even the competition between peers.
Thus
, throughout these
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which
people
have to cope with from dawn to dusk, it is merely possible for societies to take a glance at the
future
.
On the other hand
, despite the aforementioned phenomena that stop humans from looking forward.
Nonetheless
, tomorrow is still a new day, and always suggest hope to let the sufferings and pains end today.
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,
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opportunities
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to initiate a brighter beginning.
For instance
, those
people
who have accumulated stress
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, their minds are usually
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deep into their subconscious and can't find a way out from the turbulence.
In contrast
, those who notice the importance of looking forward,
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might find it easier to lay down a heavy burden and decrease the
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of having mental illnesses which can influence their
life
in a long-lasting way.
In a nutshell,
although
people
are taught to seize the moment since childhood.
Instead
, it is still essential for
people
to move forward and embrace the concept of focusing on the
future
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for a better tomorrow, it will not only influence
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but
also
pave a better path for the next generation to inherit.