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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Technology has reduced manual human efforts to a great extend. Some people think that there is no need to learn a new
language
 since by using a
computer
 one can translate and understand foreign speech.
This
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Firstly
, technology can be helpful to translate thousands of pages within
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human efforts and can work anywhere. Using a
computer
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ingle script in multiple
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 in
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ew hours. As per the data collected by IBM, an online translator can reduce 80% of
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. The accuracy of online translation is 75% more than the manually performed translation.
Secondly
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vailibity of the
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technology
, there is a loss in the job demand of
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 80% employee as per the data collected by the Times of India in
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ear 2019. The
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uman.
However
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 pages are required to be re-checked by the human for 100%
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 text. The person can use online translator application to translate and later manual checking can be performed.
Thirdly
, by learning
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language
 pupil will not only become multilingual but
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, it will enhance their confidence. Being a bilingual the people will
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 receive global job offers. The customs and rituals will be easily understood by
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multilangauge
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multilanguage
multi language
 speakers. To conclude, I completely disagree that pupils should stop learning a new
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online
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In addition
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