Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Due to the recent outcry of gender equality, most families now have working-class parents. In order to salvage the ripple effect of these shift in the social order on the younger generation, some folks think that advanced relatives are in the best position to take responsibility of their children due to the close blood relation, 

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, others argue that daycare facilities provide the best care which I strongly support because they have better resources to ensure effective childcare. On one hand, some guardian presumes their parents are the best caregivers when it comes children because of the close family relation,

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it is argued that an infant who is nurtured with love grow up to become a good citizen.

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dependency and does not allow the child to develop his or her soft skills.

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, the grandparents end up spoiling

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, it is evident that the Igbo tribe of Nigeria does not allow kids grow up in the responsibility of their grannies because of lack of attention according to research carried out by the Department of Fine Art Enugu state university of science of technology.

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, Daycares around the world are now fully equipped with resources 

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rovide essential children backing so that parents can concentrate at work without worrying every minute about the well-being of their offspring.

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, it is obvious from the recent survey by the Harvard department of physiology, that babycare centres have helped career parents raise a social class teenager with well developed basic life skills in the UK. In my opinion, I presume that childcare facilities are the best bet to close

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parenting gaps created by two working-class parents because they are better prepared to execute

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role as supported in the

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paragraph above. To conclude,

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some parents believe advanced relatives are the ideal guardian in their absence due to the blood ties whereas some presume that daycare centres are the best because they are well equipped to support a growing toddler and

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I think is the most effective means to cushion the gap created by career parenting owing to the fact

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clear they have the optimal capacity to support the kid which being related by blood alone will not provide.