Charities and organizations always give special names to particular days such as 'National Children's Day' and 'National Non-smoking Day'. What are the causes of these particular days? How effective are they?

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Non-profit organizations around worldwide have created special days
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as “National Children’s Day”, Women’s Day, Pink Day.
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as well as how those particulars days have impacted our
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. It can be argued that the causes of establishing these special days are vast. One of the causes is
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ring social awareness about one specific issue which can be social, moral, environmental, health etc.
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, “National Children’s Day” is a day to address all the matters related to children,
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as child abuse, child pornography. Another cause that can be cited is a tool to pressure governments or public sector to take some actions towards a particular topic. Car Free Day is a good example of it. It is a day that the main roads of the city are closed to bring awareness of
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assive use of cars as well as a way to pressure governments to improve public transportation or invest in bike lanes. In terms of
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ffects of theses special days on our
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, even though some people may argue that the impacts
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minimal or none, most people would agree the results of those days are overall positive. It can be argued that not the majority of
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opulation get involved in those special days,
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, all the social media advertisement about these special days make people at least think about the topic and people change their attitudes about it.
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, research has indicated that on the “National Non-Smoking Day” the number of people who decided to quit smoking increased significantly.
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, establishing particulars days like “National Children’s Day” or “Women’s Day” probably make a
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, environmental issues and
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it makes a
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more equal or healthier. In conclusion, there are a lot of causes that determine the establishment of special of
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articular day
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“National Children Day” by
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on-profit organization.
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, no matter what the cause of those special days is, it has positive outcomes for our
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Raise awareness
  • Fundraising campaign
  • Advocacy
  • Policy change
  • Social reform
  • Community engagement
  • Collective action
  • Behavioral change
  • Educational tools
  • Health awareness
  • Public attention
  • Non-profit organizations
  • Initiatives
  • Support and solidarity
  • Resource allocation
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