You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the museum. In your letter, - introduce yourself - explain what experience and special skills you have - explain why you are interested in the job Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for the holiday job which you advertised recently in the “Times Of India” newspaper. I am a twenty-one-year-old English speaking student and at present, I am in my
second
year studying History at Lincoln College; plus I am very keen to have a holiday job
this
summer. My current session will finish by the end of May and I am free until the end of August.
Last
year, I worked as a tourist guide and enjoyed it very much. I would like to have the opportunity to meet people and practice my English speaking skills again. I enjoy going to museums and I am particularly keen on history.
Last
summer I went to a historical exhibition of Ancient Greek objects which was held in London. I have often been
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your museum and I am familiar with the items you have. I will be a great asset to your museum shop. I do hope you will be interested in my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ben Sand.
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