someone heared a Noise of dog and complaints about it

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Around 8:50pm,resident from

Suite

#415 informed the

writer

that there is noise coming in her

Suite

because someone's dog is barking on

third

or fifth floor.After that,

writer

conducted patrol on

third

and fifth floor but

writer

did not hear anything.

Then

writer

visited fourth floor and knocked the door of

Suite

#415 to ask that if noise is still coming in her

Suite

Then

,she informed the

writer

that noise is not coming now.No

further

action has been taken.

This

is just for your information.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

80 words

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someone heared a Noise of dog and complaints about it

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.

Some people think that education should be free for all. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is too much noise in the public places of cities. What is the caused and how government and people in that areas can solves the problem.

In some countries, secondary schools provide students with an opportunity to learn skills such as cooking, basic repairs, drawing and woodwork. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teaching such non-academic classes in school?

Million of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?