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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some nations, the more
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people gain
weight
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, the less of their
health
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 and
fitness
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 have.
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 and offer some possible top
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 problem. There are a number of reasons for the spiking of
weight
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 and the diving levels of
health
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 and
fitness
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. The
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 reason is unhealthy eating habits. Inhabitants nowadays tend to consume too much fast
food
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, starch. These foods can cause people to gain
weight
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,
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 they are low in vitamins and minerals. Another reason is sedentary lifestyles. People tend to work with
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omputer or work from home, which leads to less exercise. As a consequence, they are becoming increasingly
weight
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 and less likely of
health
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 and
fitness
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 There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the issue mentioned above.
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, it is important for their mind to control what they eat to make sure they have
a healthy
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healthy food
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food
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.
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, they should know about
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etrimental effects of
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imbalanced
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 so that they can make more healthy
food
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 choices.
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, it is necessary for people to exercise and physical activity would help them control their
weight
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,
health
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 and body In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the increase of
weight
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, the decrease of
health
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 and
fitness
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 and measures should be implemented to tackle
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 issue
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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