Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the number of students pursuing university degrees has increased significantly. According to a recent study conducted by the University of Chicago, the number of college graduates increased by 50 % over the past decade. The argument that youth should opt for work

instead

of studying in college is both agreed and disagreed with by many. The two sides of

this

argument will be thoroughly analyzed and discussed in

this

essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

Firstly

, pursuing higher

education

will help teenagers to obtain high paying white

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collar

jobs.

For instance

, students who

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a bachelor degree in computer science earn around $100000 per year.

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Moreover

,

this

helps them to ascend in their career and to reach

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managerial

positions in their organization.

This

is why it can be argued that youth should go to a university to complete higher

education

.

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Nevertheless

, degree graduates are not preferring to be employed for low-paying jobs

such

as vehicle mechanics, home cleaners to name a few.

This

is having a

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detrimental

impact on the existing workers in these fields as well as on

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society.

For example

,

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extended working hours of its employees due

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the shortage of cashiers.

However

, technological advancements and

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dvent of artificial intelligence are changing the picture. Recently the Amazon Inc announced that it would open

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grocery

stores without any employee by leveraging the innovative tools available

such

as

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facial

-recognization, auto-pay.

Therefore

, persuading students to work

instead

of seeking admission in higher studies may have short term advantages, but in the long run

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it adversely impacts the society as technological advancements will replace these jobs. To summarize, two sides of the argument concerning

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rospect of

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higher

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education

medication

on students have strong support.

However

, after

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horough analysis of both sides, it is clear that the idea of working

instead

of pursuing higher

education

can not be justified. It is

therefore

concluded that

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higher

education

is of paramount importance to the youth.