Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some say that a minor quantity of disposal is recycled from their homes and they argue that making it a legal requirement is the most viable way to increase recycling.
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and requirements, and others are encouraged by fear. Some people are moved by rules and not by their common sense.
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overnment punish those citizens that do not recycle, they will be fearful and will start recycling to avoid those punishments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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