You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear
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Shah, I enrolled myself for the part-time evening
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on "Public Speaking"
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month. I am writing
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letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue with the
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week
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onwards. I am currently working full-time as a "Sales Analyst" with one of the FMCG companies. Recently, I was given an additional opportunity to handle some ground-level marketing activities.
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to different cities in the coming month starting
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week
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. As per the current timetable of
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Speaking
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, I need to be present in the classroom for 5 days a
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. On account of the additional role given to me, I will no longer be in my current city for more than 3 days a
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.
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will lead to missing the classes regularly and
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I will have a backlog to complete which will be difficult for me at
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point
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time.
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, I would like to discontinue the
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for
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the moment. I will like to restart
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course
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in the
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semester starting January, where you will be teaching the
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again from scratch.
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will allow me to not miss any of the lectures as my work schedule will become normal in a month's time. Hoping for a positive response from your end. Yours sincerely, Tej Kapadia
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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