Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and a lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

A significant number of individuals suppose that we have a rise of
aggression
and disregards the safety and well-being of other people nowadays. In my opinion, there is one of
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to be investigated, studied, discussed between sociologists, psychologists and other scientists, because the level of anti-social
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directly connected with a large
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of factors,
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inequality and destitute, changing model of
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amily, developing technologies and media.
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pen society, each our step might be showed and published at
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ocial network, so the general public influence to us much more intensely than in the past. In
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way people live in stressful circumstances, being under pressure from
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ublic - one of self safe reaction might be decreasing respect for others.
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I tend to suppose that
aggression
has transformed from physical harm forms like fighting and hitting to social harm forms like spreading
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and discrimination. According to physiologists,
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one of basic human characteristics. In
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we need to decrease
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ndividual level of
aggression
through drop tension and stress.
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egative attitude to discrimination, prejudice and bias.Consideration of discrimination and biases need to be case study every time for all generations for improving the situation.
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