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You recently attendened a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I had the business meeting at your hotel yesterday at 7 p.m. on occasion I forgot my copybook at the restaurant. Unfortunately, I recognised it only at home. I would like to ask you about attending to me. As I said before my colleagues and I were at the restaurant on the 15 floors. We were sitting at the round table, my seat was
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 from the opposite window to the bar. In my copybook,you can find my project's copies
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 my timetable and inside papers was my id-account. These things dependant
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 my job,
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 I won't have access to my working place,
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,I can be fired from the company. Kindly ask you to connect with your waiters and ask them if they found my documents. I will be waiting for an answer from you as soon as possible, how is more suitable for you by phone or email. Best regards, Maria
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
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  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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