In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
The noun phrase metropolis seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The word over populated seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
It appears that an article is missing before the word better. Consider adding the article.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase otherwise. Consider adding a comma.
The noun phrase high percentage seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word cater. Consider adding the preposition.
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
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