In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

With the rise in global population, there has been an increase in the demand for new housing societies in urban areas.
This
has created many challenges for cities
such
as traffic or pollution.
Hence
, it is required to develop new living areas in the
countryside
.
Last
decade has seen great migration of people moving from rural areas to
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etropolis, due to which they are getting
over populated
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.
This
has created multiple issues for city administration
such
as an increase in air pollution and heavy traffic congestion. To counter
this
, governments are establishing new residential areas in the
countryside
.
This
provides
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etter quality of living for people at a lower price.
However
, many people have concerns that the
countryside
needs to be protected,
otherwise
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it will damage the environment. In order to prevent that, the new housing projects must have a better landscape with
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igh percentage of parks and green lands. These societies can use renewable sources of energy
such
as solar or wind, thereby reducing the carbon footprint. In
this
way, these projects can become sustainable, at the same time it can cater
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the needs of the people. To conclude, many cities are growing in population, which requires new houses to be constructed. Since the cities are already over capacity,
therefore
new establishments are moving towards the
countryside
. The authorities must ensure that these places must be built in an eco-friendly way
such
that it does not harm the environment.

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