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University should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

#university #numbers #study
There is no doubt that in some field of studies are exclusively for one particular gender.
However
, it is often thought that the situation has to be changed. In my opinion,
this
 transformation would bring a lot of merits to
both
society
 and
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ndividual. The primary reason is to give an equal opportunity is that
this
 ensures
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gender equality in
society
.
This
 is because, currently, our
patriarchial
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society
 hardly allow women to build-up the career they want,
this
 must be abolished for the better tomorrow.
For instance
, mechanical engineering, which was a
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 speciality, but it has been started to
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admit
 girl students, by doing
this
, women can contribute their talents in these
fiels
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fields
files
.
Additionally
, when universities' allotment focus on the same number of learners from
both
 sex would produce a stronger
work force
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, which can utilise a variety of talents and ideas of
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both
 sections.
Consequently
, standards of women would be amplified, and
this
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 a strong message that anyone can
exel
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excel
.
For example
, in India, even for nursing and engineering college
admitt
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admit
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applicants from each
calegories
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categories
.
Thus
, discriminations based on sex can be limited. In conclusion, it is considered that the higher level of educational institutions should not show any inequality
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 while admitting its applicants. I think
this
 is essential for the betterment of
both
society
 and women. It is predicted that changes can start from the basic level.
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