Nowadays tourist are visiting one place to another places. However, people think that tourist should adopt the other cultureof country where they are visiting do you agree or disagree

It has become the moot issue whether the globetrotters should embrace the
culture
of the hosting country or they should only follow their native beliefs?
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, distinct masses have distinctive mindsets. Certainly, I accord myself to
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arge extent to the
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with the plausible favourable and unfavourable reasons which have shaped my opinion. To start the deliberation, there are
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of things that can be favoured the statement. The tenable aetiology is traveller visit
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every part of the world to explore the unfamiliar
culture
, traditions, sightseeing and to grab the knowledge. There is famous quote " when in roman, do like
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" it will help tourists to blend with local residents in order to learn their traditions, cultural beliefs
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therefore
, they will get enormous support and respect from the local people.
For Instance
, pilgrims going every year for Hajj the sacred city of
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mecca
Macca
in Saudi Arabia. Throughout Holiplace you are expected to remove signs of wealth or class distinctions by replacing your clothing with simple white garments. These pieces are called 'ihram clothing.
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with
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elcoming community with ease,
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they would not face difficulties while
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visiting
one place to another.
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, local provincial can guide them when they speak their language and regards their values, food. Eventually, their trip
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worthwhile when they have been welcomed by open arms.
On the other hand
, despite having things in the favour of adopting
culture
by
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however
, there are few things which cannot be possible for
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to espouse. To exemplify, there are some indigenous tribes in Africa, they have their own dynamic
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values which is quite
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for
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to follow the same
such
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take on local
culture
would make them uncomfortable
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it is always not a favourable idea to acquiring the customs and rituals of hosting country. To recapitulate,
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immersion
would definitely help visitors in so many ways. Native people adore the
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who
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like residents, they guide them, assist them in unfamiliar circumstances or places.
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get along with locals their trip
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assle, cheerful and they will get the chance to know the inhabitants very closely. Apparently, there are some uncomfortable situations where globetrotters would not feel comfortable
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ommunity to feel them better irrespective of knowing the language barrier or other discomforts.
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