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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in effort to deal with the health problems. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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increasing
 number of people with overweight are forcing the health care system to find the solution
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 health problems. Some think that introducing physical
education
 in schools is the one way to abolish
this
 problem. In my opinion, I agree that giving physical
education
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 good way to aware students and
society
. A good reason
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 reducing overweight people is to aware school students by providing them
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physical
education
. Showing them the daily exercises practically will help them to remain fit in early ages.
This
 will
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 encourage students to take part in different types of sports and games.
Moreover
, the students in schools are
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uture of the country so we can have some expectations from them to develop a healthy
society
. Another part to consider that having physical awareness lessons in schools by different methods can aware
society
.
However
,
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organizing
 public events or seminars in schools will help to teach community regarding good eating habits.
Also
, making students
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aware
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their
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 to take part in
such
 events will be a good idea. In conclusion, school
education
 is a must to decrease the number of overweight people in
society
. Making an effort towards
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ealth care system, schools are the best place to start with.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • strain on the health care system
  • health issues
  • introduce physical lessons
  • school curriculum
  • to what extent
  • agree or disagree
  • crucial role
  • shaping habits
  • lifelong habit
  • active
  • weight management
  • burden on the healthcare system
  • root causes
  • obesity
  • poor diet
  • lifestyle choices
  • comprehensive approach
  • nutritional guidance
  • effective
  • parental involvement
  • community programs
  • promoting a healthier lifestyle
  • critics
  • academic subjects
  • academic performance
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