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Some parents believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree ?

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In
this
 neoteric era, younger generations are more fond of staying at home by watching TV or playing
computer
 games and are very less indulged in outdoor activities,
thus
 some parents are concerned about
this
,
Moreover
,they recommend reading books can be a better alternative. In my opinion,reading books not only provides knowledge but
also
 strengthen your minds to a greater extent. Due to the increase in
computer
 games and less outdoor activities adolescents are experiencing obesity and other health diseases. Fatness is the home to many diseases, while it is firmly believed that fat people have more chances to get a heart attack and other heart-related ailments. And it is
also
 being founded in the recent studies that people spending more time on
computer
 games or watching TV has weaker eyesight. Not only that it is
also
 believed that playing more violent games can make the person more violent and impatient. Advantages of reading books are diverse, books not only provide immense wisdom but
also
 enlighten your thought process. Reading books can help increase knowledge about different perspectives of people and cultures,
Moreover
,it helps in personal growth. Books are available in so vivid varieties
thus
 it provides an option to choose from different subjects and genres. To summarize, reading books can sharpen your minds and not only that it provides knowledge in a variety of subjects whereas the increase in Watching TV and playing
computer
 games can have a very wide effect of one's health and the person can become more socially awkward.
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