You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the problem with the parking explain how this is affecting you suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing regarding a parking facility which has become a problem for all the employers of our company. As our organisation rents office space in the building where only three floors are dedicated to
this
purpose and rest ones are flats there are many cars to take a place in the payless parking area. It directly impacts the work time and productivity because long seeking a free place makes workers be late for work and feel concerned about that. People are forced to spend
for
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approximately thirty minutes
to find
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a spare area.
Moreover
, it makes them agitative. Please, let me suggest one probable decision. I know
this
building has a paid parking area on the zero
floor
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. It is expensive for our coworkers to pay for it by themselves.
However
, if a company agreed to compensate some part of a fee, it would be of great help and most car owners could afford it. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon about the possibility of my proposition. Faithfully yours, Helen Myslitskaya
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