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computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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 and heavy traffic to reach and institution. Disadv-eye problem and laziness. Opinion - good for These days, due to emerging COVID-19 pandemic, there is a rise in the usage of technical gadgets for performing different tasks in day-to-day life.
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, for children, computers, laptops and mobile phone are becoming an important asset to carry out their educational requirements. In my opinion, the future requirement includes people to be well aware of the technicalities and automation process, for which operating computers are the basic steps. In
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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