Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Education is the most important Building Block for Human mental health, and

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it the role of the society too to determine how these

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impact the overall upliftment of

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ountry. The attitude of a

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towards the knowledge given by its Guru is very important. It is very well documented in ancient

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mythology for the relationship between them,how it

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and inculcate the idea of humbleness, forgiveness and to become a

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a student named Iklavya Had to donate his right

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to his Teacher Vishvakarma as Gurudakshna

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the depth of respect of Iklavya's towards his mentor.

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the time tells the practice which was followed making them as the world

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personalities.

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There are many examples in which these elements of a teacher and a student define the culture of the society .

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many indices in the area like crime, happiness index and over-all

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handling skills of there citizens.

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ot of energy from both the ends to provide

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defining the future of the whole world. so

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bond become stronger.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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240 words

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Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

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