Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Education is the most important Building Block for Human mental health, and
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it the role of the society too to determine how these
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ountry. The attitude of a
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towards the knowledge given by its Guru is very important. It is very well documented in ancient
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mythology for the relationship between them,how it
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and inculcate the idea of humbleness, forgiveness and to become a
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a student named Iklavya Had to donate his right
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to his Teacher Vishvakarma as Gurudakshna
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the time tells the practice which was followed making them as the world
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There are many examples in which these elements of a teacher and a student define the culture of the society .
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many indices in the area like crime, happiness index and over-all
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handling skills of there citizens.
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ot of energy from both the ends to provide
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bond become stronger.
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  • inspire
  • motivate
  • engaged
  • persist
  • responsibility
  • resources
  • collaborative efforts
  • educational outcomes
  • discipline
  • study habits
  • interdependent
  • individualized support
  • complex concepts
  • overcome challenges
  • receptive student
  • external factors
  • family support
  • peer influence
  • socio-economic status
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