You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: 1. Explain why you are interested in helping 2. Give details on suitable past experience 3. Suggest ways you might help with the event

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Dear Arvik, I am writing

this

letter to express my interest to volunteer

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the charity event for the physically challenged student's education that your organization has planned

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for

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31st

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the 31st

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of October. My name is

Srinithi

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Trinity

, working as a Project Manager in HCL Technologies, Chennai. From childhood, I had a special interest to involve in charity and social events as it gives me a sense of satisfaction. In the past, I have

involved

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in collecting non-perishable goods for the people affected during

Chennai

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the Chennai

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floods and

Vardha

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cyclone. At present, I am the organizer for HCL's charity foundation, where we are educating the government school children on the current technology.

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, the event organized by your NGO is

also

related to education, not only

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do I

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think I can help you to organize the content for the event but

also

, I can arrange few sponsors for the children's education. If you think we can work together,

then

kindly call me

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9999999999. I hope to receive a positive response from you. Yours truthfully, Sri

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

172 words

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The Closing

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