Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the following statement

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In today's digital age most of the people surrounding by various types of publication not only in mass media

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as TV or newspaper but

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in social media ads.These methods are mainly unethical for individuals and most of them using their personal data.

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with,many advertising agencies uses private information

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as collecting their data without permission.Cookies collect our browser history and use for its website which promotes PPC(per pay click) policy.

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cause to get back website which person already looking for

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roduct in the past.But we can't ignore that some companies have a

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privacy

policy and they already ask for authorization to use their info.Another type of immoral technique used to

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romotional

product

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with help of technology is mail advertisement.Nowadays most of the people spam full with a lot of junk mail which is provided by selling their mails for companies.

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, it has been common in today's advertising when enterprises advertise their

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, they make an advert containing harmful psychological content.

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rand mainly used by youngster

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as energy drink,cigarette advertises by pornographic style.

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makes them addictive for

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product

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and mainly most of the

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damage

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their physical and mental health without awareness of using .Another feature that can be seen in

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advertisement made by

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ashion and beauty sector.They try to introduce beauty standards

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as zero models,face in gold shape which is why most of the omen, especially among 18-30 ages,among 18-30 ages end up in physicological conditions

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as Anorexia Nervosa or depression for their body. To conclude,it is obvious that today's advertisement is mainly about state of mind and if

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controlled

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ccuarte

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accurate

way it can't make a huge impact on humans.

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, it should be the

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government's

responsibility to prevent

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condition by giving a strict rule of

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kind of activities.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the following statement

Your opinion

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In most countries, with the widespread of the use of Internet, people have more freedom to choose to work at home instead of travelling to work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?