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In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, Online communication takes a big part in
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urrent life. Most of the companies are using virtual contact to meet with employees. In
this
 essay, I will analyse the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 technical development. On the one hand, must of the employees' meetings are done online. Companies are downloading applications and forcing their employees to work through it.
For example
, currently, meetings are done in being connected to Zoom, Teams, Facetime and many other apps. All in all,
this
 type of connection had reduced the impact of spreading the disease between people.
In addition
, working online has a positive effect on finalizing work and tasks fastly.
Thus
, most of the companies did not stop their missions and employees are assuming their tasks as they were working at the office. According to recent research provided by Harvard University, more than 86% of people are working effectively from home. Overall, we assume that
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nline connection is an extremely effective method in our current health situation.
On the other hand
, virtual contact had reduced
face
 to
face
 contact. Unfortunately,
this
 development had obliged people to stay at home, without contacting other.
This
 may lead to a psychological problem, as people will be more independent in work, in dealing with others in general.
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body language and interaction with others will be lost. According to a recent poll, 22% of persons informed that dealing online all the time will not be efficient as dealing
face
 to
face
 with others. As a conclusion,
this
 technical development in meeting online had proved a high level of safely,
in contrast
 to meeting
face
 to
face
 which had a huge risk of spreading out the disease.
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