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Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In recent times, cars are being driven by modern technology called artificial intelligence.
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 technology into various sectors.
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 should be a positive development because it reduces human errors and makes them feel safe on the road. Due to
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ramatically increased number of machines,
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 cars are becoming more popular that prevents road accidents and lessons human stress.
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uman mind is continuously thinking about many tasks at the same time and they might be depressed of their family problems.
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, they cannot focus on driving and accident are obvious in
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 situation. If a robot is running a car we can decrease the number of accidents.
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, Tesla cars have proven to be very successful and road-friendly cars. You just need to sit and relax, it will take you to your destination without any trouble. Machine-based vehicles should be welcomed because it is helpful in reducing the number of traffic accidents. Sometimes humans get confused or uncertain while driving. So, with the help of AI
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we don’t have to think in the risky situations in which direction we are going to turn the steering wheel.
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, these technologies have sensitive sensors. You don’t have to word about applying breaks on traffic lights or while you are about
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rash with another vehicle.
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, I wrote an assignment in my
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 cars. A Survey done by my group members showed that 8 out of 10 people actually feel safe and comfortable in
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 cars. In conclusion, technology has risen dramatically in every field and is considered to be helpful for humans in many ways. In order to reduce traffic accident
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 cars has been very successful in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Artificial Intelligence (AI)
  • autonomous vehicles
  • traffic management
  • route optimization
  • human error
  • technological advancements
  • innovation
  • convenience
  • elderly
  • disabled individuals
  • job displacement
  • logistics
  • transportation
  • implementation
  • maintenance
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