Question: In order to prevent Covid-19 pandemic from spreading, many extreme measures have been taken such as quarantine, isolation, social distancing, which had significant impacts on different sectors, especially education due to school closure. In such a context, many people suggest that GCSE exam should be abolished to relieve the burden on students and the whole society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this suggestion. What is your opinion?

Covid-19 pandemic has impacted all aspects of our lives especially the education sector. Many argue that seniors exam should be compensated by the authorities to main social distancing at the
test
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To begin
the deliberation, there are myriad of reasons that can favour shutting down the
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Firstly
, governments are still under creating appropriate SOPs for schools and universities to follow.
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, Pakistan government re-opens schools early September has seen a pike in
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pread of the
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after flattening the curve after three months of strict lockdown. Re-opening exam institutes might lead to the spread of disease and affects the students.
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andemic has been a stressful time for almost everyone, especially for students whose education was interrupted. Preparation for
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est could add on more stress,
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more stress and pressure for both students and parents. On the other, students and their parents fear that if they did not take
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est, they will waste a school year. Repeating or dropping academic year might not be an ideal situation and to avoid
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school can pursue students to appear for exams, but
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with the
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knowledge to take
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est in the
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advantages
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toll on everyone and schools pressuring students to take a
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stress in their lives.
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