You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Say, why he/she would not enjoy going to college • Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.

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Dear Mary, It is good to hear from you after a long time. It's
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that you have completed your studies in school. As you have written to me asking for advice about whether you should continue your studies or apply for a
job
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, I would say that colleges will give you only theoretical knowledge about the subject you want to specialize in.
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, three long years will not provide you with any sort of experience, rather it will be quite boring and you will end up feeling
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.
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, if you seek a
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time, it may benefit you in many ways.
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, it will give you
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exposure to the work environment.
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, you can practically apply what you have learnt so far.
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, when you start earning money ,it will boost your confidence level.
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,when you gain experience, you have
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better
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opportunities in future.
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, I would reckon you to apply for store cashier in a supermarket or an account assistant in a reputed ca firm as you always wanted to specialize in accountancy. These
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categories will help you fully understand the concept and application of accounts in
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world. Hoping to hear from you soon. Regards Uttara
Submitted by mehra.uttara on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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