Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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odern period, all societies have

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discussions related to categories of people who hold a crucial position in the bodies of the government and participate in the

management

of the

state

. While some kind of people consider that young people do not have to be appointed to important posts which directly influence the life of the

state

and the society, the thoughts of other people are definitely different and the appointment of young people to the abovementioned positions is considered as

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uccessful idea. The

first

group of people who against the appointment of young people to the governmental positions has some arguments on

this

subject. The

first

one is that the

experience

of young employees is not considered appropriate to the significance of the positions. They are thinking young people do not have enough

experience

on job environment,

conversely

, middle-aged or older people have major

experience

and they approximately know all type of problem-solving methods that provide more efficiency on the problematic matters.

Secondly

, according to some group of people, the youngsters are acting due to their emotions on the process of decision-making in which could result

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the

negatice

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negative

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political situations. The

second

group,

on the other hand

, reveals that the participation of youth in the

management

of the government is inevitable as long as crucial. The claim consists of

impossiblity

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impossibility

of the entire improvement of the

state

and social prosperity without youth presence. It is undeniable the significance of the young people for modern

management

of the government due to a compelling fact that shows the youngster

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more willing to the innovations and creativity. The young people could easily risk at any time, in compare with middle-aged and older people , in order to

achive

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achieve

the progress and apply for all novel ideas to improve their country. In conclusion,

although

it could be a lack of

experience

in the youngsters, I consider that youth presence with robust enthusiasm in the governmental positions could

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positively in both the

state

management

and flourishing of the society

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vital degree.