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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

#job #employment #agency #sort #skills
Hello, I am an Indian national, currently pursuing my Masters in Cyber
Security
, at
University
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 of Windsor, where I have been for the past year. I am looking for a part-time job in the field of Penetration Testing or Cyber
Security
 Analyst, which would
also
 allow me to gain practical experience in my domain of study. I can work in the afternoon on weekdays, whereas on
weekend
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weekends
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 my calendar is open throughout the working hours. I have 2 years of experience as a System
Security
 Engineer, where I built
firewall
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firewalls
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, honeypots and assessed systems for
its
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their
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security
 vulnerabilities.
I
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amI
wasI
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proficient in quite a few software development languages viz., javascript, python, and Java. My experience allowed me to interact with clients from various domains and cultures, enabling me to a work in an asynchronous environment. Looking forward to a positive reply from you. Thanks and regards, Rajesh Sharma.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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