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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 pie charts provided reveals
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the
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 of various
students
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 and junior
lecturers
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 who
study
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numbers
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 of journal
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 at an Australian University.
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, PhD pupils mostly
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 over 12 journal
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 weekly. Clearly, the
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 for junior
lecturers
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read
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 6 to 11
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 are the highest and
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, the
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 became the lowest when they
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 just 1 to 5 blogs. When it comes to studying over 12
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, the
percentages
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 of PhD
students
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 are significantly over 50% and 60% more than that of junior
lecturers
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 and all
students
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 respectively. Meanwhile, with a huge difference of over 60%, the
percentages
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 of all
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study
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who study
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 1 to 5 journals per
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 are higher than that of junior
lecturers
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study
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 the same amount of journal blogs.
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 75% of junior
lecturers
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 are more interested in studying 6 to 11
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 per
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,
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, 15% of PhD
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, which is compared to 60% higher than junior
lecturers
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, are keen on reading the same amount of blogs per
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. On a final note, surprisingly, there are only 1% of
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studying
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 1 to 5 numbers of journal
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, students, lecturers, study, articles, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
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