In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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none can avoid, while some embrace growing old others dread getting old. Ageing comes with

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, many are not able to carry on with basic life activities without

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. British residents often

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rehabilitate

themselves to an old

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home

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, where they expect to be in better hands of

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care givers

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and nurses to spend the

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part of their lives.These homes are fully funded by the

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and not the family,

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up will argue who should be responsible for funding these old

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homes. An old

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needs to be well equipped with enough staff to tend to the needs of each resident, its obvious that

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care givers

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will expect salaries at the end of each month.Over

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above

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there are other expenses

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as food,

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of the

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, electricity and other miscellaneous expenses that are required to successfully run a

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.An

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Individual

pays as high as 30%

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for approx 30 years of their life to the

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in

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anticipation

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will take

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of them when they will not be capable of earning a living.

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research held in

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showcases that on an average an individual pays six times his annual spend on grocery and medical to the

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in taxes.

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spends only a small percentage of

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homes,considering a lot of old

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to be a part of

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aitlist for

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2 years before being able to shift themselves. Shifting to a new

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is difficult for old fellows, as it is

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emotionally

draining and triggers insecurity and anxiety.With families being nuclear in size it is often difficult for young workers to dedicate themselves in caring for the old,without putting their career at risk With the inflation levels being all time for

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decade it is increasingly seen that new generation

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optimal

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families are usually residing

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a couple hundred miles away from the elderly due to either work or study making it extremely expensive to travel and address the needs of the

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.

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igh cost of health

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it is not possible for families

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to afford

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the old

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homes.It is

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uty of the

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who drains us

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our income with high

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rates with the promise of being there when we need them. Considering the above point of view

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we can safely conclude that the

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should fund the elderly homes and increase the number of

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homes to ensure each

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tax payer

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who contribute so much to the society, gets

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good

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in their old

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.We can

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the argument

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basis the numerous example of other

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world countries who have successfully

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the old.