Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football, while other people think that taking part in individual Sports like Tennis Or swimming is better .discuss both view and give your opinion

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Playing any sport is beneficial for
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uman body either its a
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sports or solo.
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, Many people
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argue
that one medium is better than the other. I agree that in some special circumstances individual sports are better than the collaborative format but I advocate, that in the long run,
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sports are helpful for the overall development of
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iving being. Collaboration is the prime skill required for any individual to be
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successful
, and group sports can help to
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that competency.
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in a Football
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, a strikers role is to attack and for the defence and mid-
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fielding
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eam relies on other players.
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division of responsibilities results in creating a collaborative and trusting environment among the
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. Each individual can work on their
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strengths
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individual games create independent players but
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sports
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many qualities that one requires for
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better life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cooperation
  • team spirit
  • sense of belonging
  • community
  • leadership
  • trust
  • collective responsibility
  • dependency
  • self-reliance
  • self-discipline
  • goal setting
  • tailored development
  • flexibility
  • social support
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